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Freelancer
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Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 23:21 Post subject:
Wewt i wrote my first thing in English O-o Subject description: Wrote somthing |
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Some peace i wrorte that is DESCENT atleast
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StonedCabbage
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Joined: 18 Jun 2006 Posts: 2273 Location: Birmingham, United Kingdom Country:  Browser:  Age: 38
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 02:16 Post subject:
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Free is a big Softie @ Heart
n1 mate, considering I can't ryhme in my own language let alone any1 elses
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Freelancer
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 02:38 Post subject:
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StonedCabbage wrote: |
Free is a big Softie @ Heart
n1 mate, considering I can't ryhme in my own language let alone any1 elses  |
Lol dude But True Soft and Cudly ...
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nex7one

Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 1026
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:48 Post subject:
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He it is already good for a first thing in english dude. Full of emotions
Give us the next as soon as you do another one
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Controllerboy_TSGK
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:42 Post subject:
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well done
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Xmeagol
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Joined: 26 Oct 2006 Posts: 3612 Location: Oh my god look behind you it's an evil combine advisor with a raging erection oh my god. Country:  Browser:  Age: 703
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:57 Post subject:
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Freelancer
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 13:11 Post subject:
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DrBreen wrote: |
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That is the Reaction i knew will Happen with breen
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Xmeagol
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 13:22 Post subject:
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Freelancer wrote: |
DrBreen wrote: |
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That is the Reaction i knew will Happen with breen  |
hehe
what is it? a poem? its nice
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Xmeagol
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 13:32 Post subject:
Re: Wewt i wrote my first thing in English O-o Subject description: Wrote somthing |
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i made this a while ago, it's translated so the rhymes are gone
this should be "AABB AABB AABB AABB AB" but its like "ACDF MNDF" etc
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No one loves you like me
My cat knows but it died
Too much time I stayed without seeing you
At the same time I was dying slowly
I Saw you going away
Much time I waited for this hour
I phoned to you in dinner time
you disapointed me because you had to study
I have much love to give you
Infinit, like sand in the sea
it seems that the love keeps me
Even so I want to be with you
I do not know any more anything to say
If I cry, it begins to rain
For you I can't cry
What can i do either than loving you
Here I am writing a poem...
Because I know that for you, everything is worth it.. |
took awhile to find a none shitty translaor, even then i had to change some words
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Phat Bacon

Joined: 09 Dec 2006 Posts: 1178 Location: Behind the Stick that killed you Country:  Browser:  Age: 32
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 04:53 Post subject:
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hooray nice poem
i could understand it !
omg english hax i want sum!
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